May Meeting : Theme – Max

We discussed Connie’s Monday workshop on Style and Form in Fiction. 

This month’s offerings for critiquing included two excerpts from ongoing projects – both novel-length manuscripts.

I have learned a lot on writing (and sticking to) Points of View (POV), over the past months. This month my excerpt was written from the ‘camera’s’ POV. You would think, being a movie buff, that this would come easy. Well… no. I have a long list of notes and recommendations for this chapter’s rewrites.

Take home message: A camera cannot think or judge. It describes what it sees.


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